Thanks much for your comments for the last update. Thrilled to get such positive feedback.
BTW still need to proof-read this, but still posting it...
Part 10 - Revelation
Lavanya Kashap was nothing if not organized. She looked at the file in
front of her, where she had categorized the material on Khushi methodically.
She re-read the information one more time, recognizing that there was nothing here
that suggested there was anything special about that girl in way whatsoever.
She was good-looking but then there were so many better-looking girls who had
entered ASR’s life. She required to think rationally and tackle this issue from
multiple sides. She needed to make Khushi understand, that ASR may choose to
f*** her, but in the end he would always come back to Lavanya Kashap and ASR
needed to understand that Khushi would easily go and fool with somebody else.
If there was one thing that ASR hated immensely was sharing anything he
considered his! ASR was extremely possessive! Fooling with another guy when you
are with ASR, meant end of road with him, permanently.
She sat still, in deep thoughts when a slow smile lit her face.
She knew how to kill two birds with one stone. It was perfect!! She removed her
cell phone and dialed him. "Heeeyyyy NK! How are you doing? This is Lavanya," she
cooed
**
It was as if his pen had a will of it’s own and the ink went on flowing
on the paper. Arnav Singh Raizada was in a creative mode today and had designed
a personal piece for somebody after a hiatus of eight years. He had started his business of high fashion
with a very humble beginning of creating costumes for a play but then business
had soon picked up. And as time went on, he was more involved with the business
side of things with little time available to get creative.
Arnav looked at the latest sketch of his creation in front of him. It
was a stunning mauve colored lehnga with bright fuchsia border and crystals of
various hues of blue adorned the lehnga. The color and the fabric would just
flow on Anji to bring out her natural beauty. He felt immense satisfaction
and pleasure to see his vision materialize on paper. Anji would look gorgeous
in these dresses. He had designed three dresses for Anji, but he was not done
for the day, he still felt some creative energy bursting in him.
He mounted another piece of paper, took a deep breath and his hands
started rendering again, however with a different mood and a different state of mind. He was
finally finished and stepped back to look at it. It was a black colored
georgette and satin short nightwear that would simply caress her curves. He could already imagine her hardened nipples jut and push against
the satin revealing her desire for him. He could also imagine the soft curve of her
bottom and her femininity visible to him through the see through skirt. Jeez, she would look fantastic in it! He was
going to gift her this and what’s more, he was going to make sure she would
wear it….for him!
His pulse started beating erratically and his lower body instantly surged as he imagined it on her sinuous curves. He frowned a little at his body’s immediate and complete reaction to her. This was getting a little out of control and if there was one thing that he liked, was to stay in full and complete control. She was starting to get under his skin and he was not sure how comfortable he was with it. He wanted to have a relationship with her, but without much emotional attachment. It was natural that there would be some emotions involved from his side, but they needed to be absolutely within his control. This was getting a little out of hand, maybe he needed to cool it and avoid her for a few days.
His pulse started beating erratically and his lower body instantly surged as he imagined it on her sinuous curves. He frowned a little at his body’s immediate and complete reaction to her. This was getting a little out of control and if there was one thing that he liked, was to stay in full and complete control. She was starting to get under his skin and he was not sure how comfortable he was with it. He wanted to have a relationship with her, but without much emotional attachment. It was natural that there would be some emotions involved from his side, but they needed to be absolutely within his control. This was getting a little out of hand, maybe he needed to cool it and avoid her for a few days.
However what Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada didn’t know was that there was
nothing predictable about Ms. Khushi Kumari Gupta. He never got a chance to
avoid Khushi, because to avoid somebody you needed to meet them first. Arnav had
not seen Khushi for the past two days. Where the heck was she!! His eyes searched
around the house without being obvious, but there were no signs of her. On the
third day, after much deliberation, he asked Anjali whereabouts of Khushi on
the pretext of work, and if she had gone somewhere for few days. However he was
taken aback to know that she was very much here in RM. Where was she then? and
why had he not seen her? Another day passed without him catching a
glimpse of her and he started to get very agitated. Where
was she? What was she playing at? Was she purposely avoiding him? A slow rage started to built up inside
him at the thought of her avoiding him… How dare she!
**
It was 2.00 am in the morning, and she was tossing and turning in the
bed. In spite of avoiding him for so many days, the things that had transpired between them during the last meeting was still vividly etched in her mind. Her body
still burned with the feelings he had evoked that night and Ms. Khushi Kumari
Gupta who did not run away from anybody, for the first time was running away from
the strong response he evoked in her body.
Finally she got up and decided to head out for a swim as there was no
fear of bumping into ‘him’ at this
ungodly hour. Remembering how he had shown her to shut off the motion detector,
she stepped outside and dived in to the pool and swam with long
elegant strokes.
Arnav was lying on his bed staring away into nothingness, when he saw the pool
motion detector light go off. He knew it would be none other than the elusive
person who monopolized his thoughts lately and in an instant he headed down to
confront her. He quietly stepped in the
pool area, observing her. It had been so many days since he had last seen her,
last held her; he just stood there and gazed at her, taking his fill of her like a starving
man. Eventually she stepped out of the pool, and donning a robe,
when he called out to her “Khushi…”
Khushi jumped out of her skin at the sudden voice, dropping the towel in
surprise. “Aaa…Aap? I am sorry I didn’t mean to disturb you” she said.
“You always disturb me Khushi” he retorted back.
“What?” Khushi asked still a little taken aback to find him here at this
time.
“Nothing. Where were you this past week?” he asked flatly
“I was here…”
“Really? How come I didn’t see you. ”
“I….I…”
He moved near her, till he could almost feel her breath. “Why are you
avoiding me?” he asked her evenly
Khushi quietly stood there, unable to retort anything back.
“Khushi answer me!” He ordered. Khushi was still mute and now his
bottled up rage started to simmer. He grabbed her upper arms and pulled her
closer on to him, so that their bodies were held flush against each other “I am
waiting for your answer” he stated softly, increasing the pressure on her arms.
“Let me go…you are hurting me…” she protested
“I will, after you answer me. One more time Khushi...why are you avoiding
me?” He queried almost shouting at her, his patience in tethers.
“Because I didn’t like what I felt with you last time…” she replied back
hotly
She didn’t like it!! it was one the most exhilarating experience of his
life and she didn’t like it!! Was she disgusted by what happened? Disbelief
and hurt clouded his eyes for a moment before he masked it and raised
indifferent eyes to her. “Oh really?”
“YES!” Khushi yelled. “I didn’t like it at all. I wish we did not meet that night for hot cocoa. Now, I am never at peace and I feel restless and edgy all the
time. I can’t even focus on my work anymore!!”
Arnav was stunned for a moment to hear her reply. What the!! Was she
saying what he thought she was saying…Here he was thinking that she was
offended by what they had done that night, but on the contrary she responded to it...that also so passionately! An euphoric lightness flooded
through him making him smile and laugh lightly at her words.
Khushi saw him laughing and her anger and the feelings she was trying to keep
in check this past few days erupted. “Are you laughing at me??” “How dare you
mock me!! This is all your fault!” she shouted at him. “I cant stop thinking
about how you touched me. I think about it all the time and I want to touch you
like that too… I think about doing crazy things to you.. It’s so unsettling, I
cant even talk to Anjali or focus on my designs and it has never happened to
me..THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT…and I..” she continued her tirade, oblivious of what
she was revealing to him, too focused on venting out her bottled up emotions.
“How do you want touch me” he softly asked, his caramel eyes darkened with
desire
“wha…what?” Khushi asked
“You said you want to touch me and do things to me…What things do you
want to do to me?” he asked in a husky voice, her innocent words making him
throb to an aching point.
Dear lord did she tell him that? Oh no! “Let me go…” she muttered
starting to struggle against his grip, thoroughly embarrassed at her
revelation.
“Please please Arnav let me go. ” she hoarsely requested…
His answer was to hold her more intimately against him..He moved his
face closer to her and whispered against hers… “I will, I promise, but first you
tell me how you dream of touching me and what things you feel like doing to me…
Tell me Khushi”
**
As usual, Comments please! more comments = more motivation = faster updates (that's me being sneaky ;-)
loved it la she is always up to no good and she is bring nk to cause trouble arnav want khushi with no strings attached can't wait to see his reaction when another guy flirts with her loved the update thanks for the pm
ReplyDeletestalker alert :D
ReplyDeletelol he thought of avoiding her but khushi is fast..
ugh i hate lavanya! nice update!!!! :)
woah... all your updates are hot.. but this one was epic.. khushi revealing what she felt was awesome..
ReplyDeletegood work..
Awesome.
ReplyDeleteSo ASR wants Khushi. As in desires her badly but doesn't want to commit.
Hmmmm. Man.
I am glad Khushi avoided ASR intead of him avoiding her.
Pool scene is getting hot.
Can't wait to read more.
Update soon.
Thanks.
Zafi
Nancy...an awesome update.But, that nagging feeling has crept permanently since LAVANYA is cooking something .I hope the plan falls flat.LOL!!
ReplyDeleteThe Hide n Seek has up roared the desire in he Panther...hehheh!!!
Ash.
She blurted out everything lollllllllllll
ReplyDeleteLavanya the vampire what is she planning i wonder
Undercoverhappy
Awesome update, had been waiting for this for days, hope the next one won't be delayed :)
ReplyDeleteKhushi is such an innocent, blurting out her true feelings, hope ASR knows her value and doesn't hurt her.
La and her games should be caught by ASR or Anjali so that Khushi cannot be harmed in any way.
Please update the next one soon :)
Thanks for the PM. Nice update. Looks like Lavanya has big plans. Khushi revealed her innermost feelings to him. This is all new to her.
ReplyDelete- desisweetheart9 from IF.
Nice Update What is Lavanya Upto ..Something scary on the way ..Loved the update as always ..Please continue soon cant wait for a week to read the part..:)
ReplyDeleteSo finally they reveal their feelings, Arnav is so naughty, but I like the direction this is taking.
ReplyDeleteLooks like Lavanya is upto no good, hope she doesn't mess up things. Can't wait your next update Nancy
Dee (drdee142)
That was another awesome naughty episode. I was waiting for this. Thanks for the update
ReplyDeletenice update!!!
ReplyDeleteohhh...no...u stopped there on proposal ....u know we eager to know what than...ha..ha...loved it.......update soon(sari.love)
ReplyDeleteI've been stalking your blog since the past two days, loved it.
ReplyDeleteA naughty Arnav is a delight. What a dirty mind he has :P
mistyrains
awesome :)
ReplyDeleteHeheheheh
ReplyDeleteKhushi in anger said all the thgs she shuldnt
Arnav bechara have to face so much
La is upto sumhtg
Very Nice Plan Lavanya! It's a clever one as both can fall for it
ReplyDeleterofl if Arnav thought about avoiding her she was already avoiding him.
Damn she actually told him that she wanted to do things to him :L
Lovely Update, can't wait to read about what she wants to do to him
That was so hot and sexy!!!!!! Really you must stop making us feel like this, am sure we all know exactly where khushi's thoughts and feelings are coming from!!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks for PM
Awesome update!!!!!! Can't wait for the next
ReplyDeleteKhushi's so cute:)
Rabzooo
You are amazing! Great update. Please continue soon. :)
ReplyDeleteawesome update
ReplyDeleteshe has blurted everything out
That was way too short! Now I'm going to be daydreaming about what she tells him until your next update. This chapter was just brilliance.
ReplyDeleteloved it:)
ReplyDeleteloved the update..poor khushi..no wonder she is so edgy and irritated...its all arnav fever.....she's yet to c more of it....this is just the beginning....
ReplyDeletelavanya is being a bitch here....she is roping nk in???? god knows how arnav and khushi will survive this??
cont soon
aww innocent khushi. so sweet that she feels awkward but i do hope arnav goes easy on her as she is traditional.
ReplyDeletezara
xxx
wonderful update......loved the revealation update sooner dear.........
ReplyDeleteawwsum!! khushi very innocent and naive!! I hope neither fall for la's plan & @least arnav confront khushi.. great update!
ReplyDelete-frenzyy
You are such a tease? ;p
ReplyDeleteU actually stopped there? Nice update hun!! Continue soon
melovemayur
Oh Nancy....great update. La thinks to make Khushi look bad in ASR's eyes...but he already knows that there is no equation with Khushi and NK...so me thinks that plan should fall flat. As for getting one up for AVOIDANCE....looks like Khushi beat ASR to it. In the pool scene...i loved how he assumed she didn't like his touch....and she innocently blabed how and what it all means.......
ReplyDeleteNot fair that you ended it here..........hurry for the next part plz!!
wat is la upto
ReplyDeletehope her plan backfires and makes arnav and kushi more clser...
that would be fun
oh god kushi blurt out everything
smileyhug7679
Hey Nancy, this was a good update also A Tease and me love it ...
ReplyDeleteLavanya is a VAMP, Hope her plans backfire lol ..
Khushi is gottta answer Arnav now ...
can't wait to know whats gonna happen next .......
do update soon '
THANKS FOR THE PM ......
sweetvanie
Wow...an exciting update! It gets more interesting with every update...
ReplyDeletePlease update soon! Have been waiting for this one! :)
Ams.
Ever since your PM I was looking for time to read this story and finally read all. God its splendid . It has romance passion sexual tension humor suave wow I totally love the romance in it. So many times I miss out on good stuff and I am so glad I read this. I so love this to bits. I looooooove this ASR.
ReplyDeleteNext time just Say in the PM" just read it dammit"!��
I totally love this
I hate Lavanya, please kick her out, please????
ReplyDeleteYou can add me in the story as a special appearnace to kick her out!! ;)
Anyway I loved the rest, it was really short though!!
Update soon
xxx
aww man that cliff hanger is annoying me :( but great update none the less
ReplyDeleteMaan, you've done it again!!! Lol you always end it at a crucial point - dammit. Now I'll be stalking you for the next update! Kudos for your efforts!
ReplyDeletenamedx
Arnie baby designed a lingerie for Khushi, you lucky lucky girl!
ReplyDeleteLoved how she avoided him and how he got all worked up because of that.
Khushi's feelings are getting so intense.
Another top notch update Nancy...Love this.
Wow! What an update!! Lavanya is turning into a pest but I'm hoping that NK actually helps Arhi get together and not the other way round.. Ooh the intensity between Arnav and Khushi is just wow..Can't wait for more
ReplyDeleteNice update. What is Lavanya up to now? Wow the it's getting hotter between with Arnav and Khushi. Please update soon.
ReplyDeleteSo what she feels she tells him...she dont matter if it is ASR infront of him....loved it....
ReplyDeleteLavanya and NK...hope they fall flat with their ideas..landing themselves in soup infront of ASR.
GoGreen.
Loved how Khushi revealed how she felt without realizing! Hmmmm Lavanya......she's always got a plan....but will it work I wonder....fab update
ReplyDeletefatima2603
lovely update :)))
ReplyDeletegreat.......so glad you posted part 10.
ReplyDeletebut you left it at such a point...would love it if you continue soon.....
excellent work
sri.
Good story .. I like how it is progressing
ReplyDeleteMsin
I loved the update. Omg!!! So now Lavanya and NK are going to plan together. Aww... I can't believe she said that all out loud. I can't wait to read the next part. Please continue soon.
ReplyDeleterockinggirl5
I can't believe you ended it there! Wicked person!! ;-) Loved the update. Can feel a storm brewing though!
ReplyDeletegod,it ended so quickly...so nk will be lavanya TC..
ReplyDeletethe bluntness of khushi was outstanding
OMG!!
ReplyDeleteFeeling hot hot hot!
its extremely cold here in london right now but i m sweating badly!
NOW WHERE IS MY HUBBY;)
amazing update nancy pansy....
ReplyDeletekhushi's soooo innocent.....
arnav's having the time of his life by teasing the poor girl....
and wat is the la upto along with NK....
waiting for the next update coz this ending suggests something pretty interesting....
~~~ sam
Thanks for the update.
ReplyDeleteContinue soon please. You have no idea how many times in a day I stalk your blog for a new update. :p
Waitingggg!!
By the way !It's PollyTrolly from IF! :)
Deleteawesome update
ReplyDeleteloved it
no wonder khushi alwaz thinks of the plans ahead of him but somehow later falls into his trap anyhow
it was sooo cute when she babbles out all her secret emotions to him unknowingly ...n he being ASR caught them instantly ...naughty!
plzzz update soon . i wanna know khushi's reply :)
thnx for the PM
Natasha (IF)
As always, loved your update! I especially loved how Khushi kept trying to avoid him, tried to hide her feelings but ended up just spilling them in front of him! Hehe, so cute. It's reminds me of me, I can relate I do the exact same thing haha.
ReplyDeleteI love ASR, and I love your writing. Sooooo much! Can't wait for you to make my day again soon, by updating.. but no pressure haha ;)
~Sharna
awesome update :)
ReplyDeleteI love the ASR you have crafted.. and how you make me throb with two well-placed sentences. first time here, saw a rec on IF.. and this detour was SO worth it! wonderful story. brilliant writing.. my girl parts havent recovered yet...
ReplyDeleteThanks for the pm!!
ReplyDeleteNice update...
Oh no! Desperate Bitch Lavanya is up to no good. I hope her plan flops and ASR realises what she's up to and in turn actually makes the come closer.
I'm loving the whole naughty smirky dirty minded Arnav. I love the way he's so dominating and got her to confess the thoughts she has. I'm pretty sure he's going to makes her tell him how she thinks of touching him and when they do sleep together Arnav will make her do everything she described and much more ;)
Can't wait for the next chapter :)
lavanya, i hope her plan fails big time! LOL
ReplyDeleteand arnav designed a lingeria for her, i cant wait for her to wear it :P
and khusi is so naive! haha
cant wait to read more!
awesome update dEar! loveD it
Beautiful update!!... :)
ReplyDeleteWaiting for next chapter.... 5 days over... still waiting...
when will u update? :(
I loved it buddy .. Pl update fast
ReplyDeleteoooo naughty...naughty....cant believe you stopped there....
ReplyDeletegreat update as usual....scheming La is up to no good as usual as well...
passionate.intense.
ReplyDeleteAwesome update. Arnav and Khushi are so possessive. Very hot. Gazing at the stars was lovely.
ReplyDelete- desisweetheart9 from IF.
WOW FABULOUS!!!!
ReplyDeleteImpatient to read the next part especially where you stopped this one so just a short comment to say I love it!!!
Nice
ReplyDelete